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Recorded in 2 hours, written in even less. I'm mildly proud of the lyrics. Let me know if the levels are off or not, i'm not sure if it's hard to hear some parts. Recorded using my macbook's built in microphone, my acoustic guitar, and my keyboard. Crit for crit, leave a link.

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Lyrics:

What if happiness was nothing more than a temperature
Fluctuating with it’s seasons, it seems like winter now
We’d turn up our heaters and put on sweaters
To shield ourselves from how we feel inside

Good thing we’re just dealing with chemicals today
What’s the point when it’s all apples and oranges to me?

What if happiness was like light in a kaleidoscope
Not really a value, more like a substance
Our emotions would change at the shift of a cylinder
We’d just have to recognize exactly what we are looking at

Good thing we’re just dealing with chemicals today
What’s the point when it’s all apples and oranges to me?
#2
i like it...
fluctuating has weird phrasing
it seems like winter now seems like to many sylables for that bar
im really liking this moog thing going on
but if thats not the sound u were going forr? someppl dont like the 80's
i think the melody should be a little more varied.... because its not that catchy
but i really like the chord progression