#1
just made this little riff and thought i would record it to see how it sounds, man the quality is ****ty and the rhythm sucks, but hey, whatever. lemme know if you think its sad enough..lol thanks


http://media.putfile.com/new-riffage


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#2
I really loved the beginning of this and the chords when they were sustaining. When you starteded the strumming it took away from the rhythm underneath which I found more interesting than what you had over it. Instead of strumming maybe put a lead over it? Its just that I liked that rhythm so much I didn't want to hear it be drowned out by strumming. I really feel this would work well as an intro to a song and hope you decide to continue working with it.

C4C? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=836418 Any of the songs would be fine if you could do it, thanks.
#3
thanks man, yeah i dont know what to do about the strumming, but i guess i'll figure it out as i keep writing.
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#6
I think it was cool, not exactly depressing though, and definantly a slow melodic lead over top, with vibrato and the such, would be a much better idea than the chordes IMO. But the first part of it isn't bad at all.
#7
thanks man
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#10
thanks bro
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