#1
"Feverlust"

I've put up with these serpents in my cage
a locked room contained all my rage
I am not a remote control don't try and mute me
or turn me off
As you try to further my progress as a human being
you further your progress as a human seeing, that your shell of a body will crumble at the iron fist of time itself.

You are the paper
and i am the rock.
You are the shoe
as i am the sock.

Start me on fire and wait for the sirens
"i am sorry"

Your sons and your brothers
and your sisters and daughters
know the problem like Hansel knows Gretel
I speak soft as it consumes me
as if the tide came early to this desert of a sea
"See me now"
Says the ghost of a senator's son
grasping for the faith of a rejected organ donor

You are the stream
and I am the raft.
You are my dream
as I am your wrath.

Now as I regret the tip of my thoughts spilling chillingly upon paper
I have no mercy and i have no heart
the pen gets smarter as the writer get older
Regretting his work as stress turns a pebble to a boulder
he sinks beneath a sea of words
at home at last.
#2
coolness, not perfect but i liked some of the imagery greatly.
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*unzips guys pants*
*giant shlong in your face*
"It's coming right at me!"
#3
Now as I regret the tip of my thoughts spilling chillingly upon paper
I have no mercy and i have no heart
the pen gets smarter as the writer get older
Regretting his work as stress turns a pebble to a boulder
he sinks beneath a sea of words
at home at last.

I like the last section