#1
It's an idea for my band, The Other Side of Midnight check us out myspace.com/theothersideofmidnightband

Tell me what you think! Any suggestions?
Try and guess wut it's about

Verse 1

I've been the wrong one time and time again
But we're all dead in the end
I never thought that it would end this way
And now you're so far away

Chorus

This poison fills me up tonight
The hope for a better life
Why is this happening to me?
Everything changes so suddenly
How could you do this to me
(The choices that we all make)
This was a wrong one
(Times that forever change

Verse 2

My lips taste of blood
Betrayed by a loved one
Please don't cry my dear
For my end is near

Chorus

Bridge

Ah! You poisoned me, you poisoned me
(Betrayed by my lover)
Gone! For eternity, eternity
(Slain by my lover)

Still trying to finish the bridge and possibly a new section
#3
Please give the rules the once over (found at the top of this forum) then you can repost this.

Thanks man

THW
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.