#1
I wrote this song actually last august wanted to get peoples thoughts on it. this song is appearing on my album in 09. I hope you like it. Dont flame to much


So yesterday I walked in someone else shoes,
to my surprise they just happend to belong to you.
bright blue eyes and that long blonde hair with a look that can kill,
my apology i left you you lays on your window sill.

But theres singing shooting stars,
and those dancing silhouette.
her beauty could kill a million sunsets,
all im asking now is to give me one last chance,
this acoustic song explains why im such a mess.

Forgive me father for i have sinned.
I dont know where to start or even where to begin,
the lies, the lust, vs. broken trust, in a distant mind,
this girl i loved, wasnt enough, she was one of a kind.

But theres singing shooting stars,
and those dancing silhouettes.
her beauty could kill a million sunsets,
all im asking now is to give me one last chance,
this acoustic song explains why im such a mess.

[spiffy break]

But she shot those shooting stars
and broke those silhouette
the sun struck back and now she lay here down to rest
before she left she said how its for the best
with this acoustic song i am still a mess!

(C) Copyright 2007 - 2008 (sorry had to throw that in there)
And your crybaby whiny-assed opinion would be...?
#2
i like it...it seems short though
im four feet tall and could kick ur butt...end of story