#1
You see only red through your eyes
In the shadows of thought you hide
Blackening the souls of the innocent
Forcing your will upon the unconscious
Turning us all into what we hate
Choking the life out of all that's good
Chaining our sympathy to the wall

How can we fight the darkest thoughts
What will be done to stop the evil inside
Masochist thoughts trying to hide
In the catacombs of our minds
This is the plague of mankind
The struggle we all have inside

How can we fight the darkest thoughts
What will be done to stop the evil inside
This cloud of darkness continues to grow
Sucking the life out of our souls
Feeding my contempt for all
With our own eyes you watch
With our tongues you strike

How can we fight the darkest thoughts
What will be done to stop the evil inside
We can only wait until the good fades away
Just fades away, Just fades away
Together we'll fade away

It seems dark, it's mainly about the struggle between the good and evil within ourselves. Anyway, interpret for yourself and let me know what you think, thanks
#2
im kind of confused. the last three verses start with the same two lines but they each have a different structure and only two of the verses have the same number of lines. it still flows well though. it has a unique structure which makes it kind of strange to read but it seems to work for this. actually the only thing i dont like is the last line, it doesnt seem to go with the rest of the piece. other than that i wouldnt change anything.

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