#3
It sounds externally recorded. I record that way as well...check out my stuff...you can get some decent multi track stuff using cool edit pro.
#4
Hey man I really like it, the lyrics, from what I hear are great. I agree that you sound a little in a hurry but otherwise really good. I have actually listened to it twice.

Crit mine please: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=837696 .t is rough and only one guitar, keep that in mind, it will be much better with 2 guitars.
I wrote a song about war...
The kind that lives in your head.
#5
The song's got a cool feel to it. I like the progression and the lyrics. Vocals were ok pitch-wise, there was just something about them that sort of bothered me a little. other than that it was a pretty good track.
Crit mine, perhaps? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=839422
If man is 5, if man is 5, if man is 5,
then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, then the Devil is 6, the Devil is 6,
And if the Devil is 6,

then God is 7, then God is 7, then God is 7
This monkey's gone to heaven.