#1
Please give me some feedback on my cover of twilight. It is on my profile. Listen to the other songs too if you like, but Twilight is the one I would like feedback on. Thanks in advance.
#2
on the words , only loney, alright,
if you know what part of the melody im referring too
smith sings 4 notes (on - le - ee -ee)
you just hit the first and fell
not that its a huge deal but that bothered me, and its not like its bad to deviate from the original
but as a huuuuuge smith fan, nice job. i love this song so much

"but your candle burns too bright, well i almost forgot it was twilight"

beautiful
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