#2
It would have really helped to say the songs on your Myspace.

EDIT: After the first listen. The first 2 minutes of the song are good before the change, where it gets pretty boring for about a minute and a half until the riffage around 3:30 which is sweet, specially when the wah comes in.

Good song, could use some work on the middle though.

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#3
I didn't like the intro of the first 10 seconds, but doing that is still better than just opening with your first real riff of the song. The first solo, well more of a small lead than a solo, was alright, not bad but nothing that really caught my attention, put a rhythm guitar underneath it? You had a couple mini leads following that which I found a lot better and more interesting, nice job on those like at 1:48 or 1:53 for example. Your transition around the two minute mark was a bit awkward and the first rhythm didn't really seem to fit, but the solos during this section were the best in the song in my opinion. The transition into the middle and the very start of it could use a bit of work, but the solos during that section are great. Nice job overall, the only thing I feel needs work is transitioning into that middle section to set it up smoother.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=836418 Any of the songs on there besides "A Lost Cause" would be great if you could, thanks.
#6
I honestly could see this song as part of my music collection. In other words, if I had an Ipod, i would have this on there. It does remind me of Satch too. Well composed, great energy maintained through the whole song. You've got enough variety in there that it doesn't get boring. The riffing was super tight.. Really really well done
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#7
I have timing issues on my computer, i usually have to move the clips around til they fit right, so that may contribute, also it was like the first time i played most of the material on the recording, ill rerecord most of it when i get the chance to practice it more.
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I have timing issues on my computer, i usually have to move the clips around til they fit right, so that may contribute, also it was like the first time i played most of the material on the recording, ill rerecord most of it when i get the chance to practice it more.


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