#1
i posted this a while a go and i made some changes so can i get some advice on how to improve and what u think

Feels like Yesterday

Am, C, Dm, Em

V1
there’s a feeling in the air
we're all wishing you were there
empty spaces in our heart
I don’t think I can live apart

V2
it all happened so quick
one day healthy one day sick
no one could have expected this
that we'd have a final kiss

Ch
Feels like yesterday we were walking holding hands
you’re the only one who could ever understand
Feels like yesterday you said I could touch the sky
to this day I know you never told a lie

V3
Grasping your hand with concern
This is really starting to burn
The pain inside is much too great
I don’t know why I deserve this fate

Ch
Feels like yesterday we were walking holding hands
you’re the only one who could ever understand
Feels like yesterday you said I could touch the sky
to this day I know you never told a lie

V4
as I sat by your bed
slowly rubbing your head
I could feel you fading away
all we can ever do is pray

Bridge
How did this happen
what did I do
I cant believe this
I need you


Ch
Feels like yesterday we were walking holding hands
you’re the only one who could ever understand
Feels like yesterday you said I could touch the sky
to this day I know you never told a lie
#2
Well bro, all I can tell you is that your rhymes seem too forced.. The best piece of advice I can give you is: "More is less sometimes." Good luck. JaR