#1
ok these are basically a few ideas me and a friend had, first attempts really at writing stuff, and some of it doesnt really sound metally :P.

if leaving feedback, please refer to each one as 'song 1', 'song 2' etc

thanks
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#4
Alot of times you were out of key (IE, all the notes you used didn't fit well together) as is ever apparent in song 4 at the first part with the distortion and acoustic. You just need to work on that and don't make them so happy sounding...

I also noticed that you don't know that riffs don't always consist of powerchords

I think song 3 and 4 had the most going for them.