#2
I thought it sounded pretty cool. the only problem was in most of the song the timing seemed way off even though it was perfect. I don't know why but a bunch of the downbeats felt more like pickup notes and stuff.
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#4
I could try to write you a better drum beat but that might not be the problem. I'll still see what I can do.
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#5
sounds like simple plan. pop-punkish kind of sound to me. yea id say its the drums thats screwing up the timing, everything else is fine. should sound pretty cool when finished. try to put some more variation in as you go, but its really good where it is right now.

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