#1
I lynched three small animals over my vacation.
They were caught crawling in a tent.
Last night several branches fell as a result of clouds from over the mountain
Death by hanging, let 'em swing, breaking an entering, break their neck.

Yes, this tarp where I lay my belongings is the only shelter.
That doesn't meen I must share.
Woods belong to everyone, but my space is not theirs.

Retreat towards the stream where I fill my canteen.
Contaminate the water I drink.
Beavers relieve themselves in this moisture.
Does that make me a dog for sipping out of their toilet?
Sipping, not exactly...
It is a little more straight than a martini
Gulping is the word, because I am thirsty not sad.

~Nick


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Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
Last edited by freshtunes at Apr 18, 2008,
#2
br00tal dud
Quote by breakdown123
Is there such a thing as a heavy riff with out chugging on the e string?
#4
kinda reminds me of between the buried and me lyrics. pretty shweet
Originally posted by primusfan
When you crank up the gain to 10 and switch to the lead channel, it actually sounds like you are unjustifiably bombing an innocent foreign land.


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#5
Can anyone elaborate?
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#6
The last line though I love the idea I felt its execution stuttered.

"for I am thirsty not sad" just sounded a bit.. archaic in it's syntax I guess. Why not you becaus eor something? Or "''cos"?

Idk, I just felt it was awkward as it is.

Anyway, enjoyed the piece on the whole.