#1
This meant to be an acoustic song but give a little input for that too, or if its sh*t tell me and its gettin scrapped C4C fellas tell me what you think

Lonely Soldier

Well im just a lonely soldier
and i walk these streets alone
and im waiting for that day
when i can get back home

Well i fought my share of battles
and ive fought them with no shame
ive been fighting so damn long
i dont even know my name

Well i dont know why i fight them
or why i live this way
but ive fought with all my demons
and ive chased them all away

theres no place for lonely soldiers
in this world we live
so now i think its time
to meet with all my friends


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#3
Quote by dmiwshicldply
This meant to be an acoustic song but give a little input for that too, or if its sh*t tell me and its gettin scrapped C4C fellas tell me what you think

Lonely Soldier

Well im just a lonely soldier
and i walk these streets alone
and im waiting for that day
when i can get back home -------- I like the start,makes you wanna go through the whole song....


Well i fought my share of battlesTry removing the well....or replacing it to keep the flow...."well" doesn't exactly "sound good"
and ive fought them with no shameI find this a too long...not much...just a bit
ive been fighting so damn long
i dont even know my name Haha....gotta love this line

Well i dont know why i fight them
or why i live this way
but ive fought with all my demons My demons??? Try the demons???
and ive chased them all away

theres no place for lonely soldiers I find this line altering the flow a bit....was it intentional??
in this world we live
so now i think its time
to meet with all my friends Contrary to what the poster above me said...i dont find anything wrong in this line... no offense


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Well basically its a good song cant say anything more about it....
Although i would suggest you play this on an electric...not an acoustic...with overdrive on gain at about 4-6.....

Crit mine if you'd like...its in my sig... "The Smile..OTS"