I had just gotten a new Line 6 toneport, and wanted to try laying down a track. I didn't have a drummer present, so I seriously effed up the rhythm section (I am NOT a drummer!)...but let me know what you think of the rest of the track. This was recorded a good while ago, but it's some of the only stuff I have actually saved...however I'd like to think I'm a little bit better now.

kool intro. and if you aren't actually a drummer, that's a fair effort. do you play at all?
the verse sorta thing without drums went on a little too long imo, but you could probably get away with that if you had vocals on there. the outro is superb.
overall i'd probably give it a 7.5/10. nice work.

plz crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=840371
Thanks! I'll check out your tracks. I agree...the clean part is just beggin' for some vocals. And yeah...I like, played drums for the pep band in high school, but when I laid down this track, I'd borrowed some crappy digital drums, and hadn't picked up sticks in about 6 years...so yeah, rusty as hell! :-p