#1
I bet you don't know how it feels
to be walking past your house at night
I bet you don't know how it feels
To stand outside and watch the lights

And I don't know why
I just can't seem to dry
the rain on my face
all the tears I've cried

I think of the day
when you pushed me away
what can I do when I still love you

What can I do
Where can I hide -
from all of these feelings I keep inside
It's dark as can be
and you'll never see
just what it's like to feel..
what it's like to feel unloved

Bet you don't know how it feels
when your life flashes before your eyes
I bet you don't know how it feels
the moment when you realize
that you lost all you had
all that's good - all that's bad
And everyone tells you, you should be glad
Your love for me is gone
I should be moving on
And find someone new - but I still love you

What can I do
Where can I hide -
from all of these feelings I keep inside
It's dark as can be
and you'll never see
just what it's like to feel..
what it's like to feel unloved

If I could turn back time
if I could press rewind
go back to the days when you were mine

What can I do
Where can I hide -
from all of these feelings I keep inside
It's dark as can be
and you'll never see
just what it's like to feel..
what it's like to feel unloved


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Last edited by HenkiThaBooY at Apr 18, 2008,
#2
Is a slow acoustic song. Or also with distortion?

"what can I do when I still love you" and "And find someone new - but I still love you"
aren`t strong lines because they`re a bit basic. Try to replace that but to keep the meaning of it. And I have to say that the chorus is awesome!
#3
Good lyrics, I like the flow of it. some of the rhymes sound kinda forced, but I guess if its sung right they'd be fine.
On the eight day we spoke back...

let there be sound.