#1


on my desk there are 2 empty beer bottles
brown ones
the best kind.
there is also a half full glass of wine
red
i won't drink the other.
laying on the floor
in it's death pose
not even opened yet
canadian club
i kicked it over in anger
when a woman was here.
she loved me just a little too much
and the love overflowed
into my feet
they didn't like it
lashed out
poor whisky.
this is probably the most honest
i have been about hings
in a long time.
but she was a shitty woman anyway.





love is a dog from hell.



#2
haha i love it.. made me lol
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#3
Quote by we have sound


on my desk there are 2 empty beer bottles
brown ones
the best kind.
there is also a half full glass of wine
red
i won't drink the other.
Good set up, one suggestion would be to change "half full" to "half finished" I think that makes the line "I won't drink the other" easier to understand, cause on first take I found myself thinking 'the other what exactly?'

laying on the floor
in it's death pose
not even opened yet
canadian club - insert some punctuation to seperate this from the next part, a full stop maybe
i kicked it over in anger
when a woman was here.
she loved me just a little too much
and the love overflowed
into my feet
they didn't like it
lashed out
poor whisky.
this is probably the most honest
i have been about hings
in a long time.
but she was a shitty woman anyway.



Overall, really impressed with this, gives a strong sense of bitterness and the sort of vague loneliness and anger that I assosiate with being drunk and depressed alone.
Too much gain = Ears in pain
#4

the other wine is rose and white. i knew what it meant. don't give a shit about anyone elsle. and it's half full beccause i'm so positive.




love is a dog from hell.