#1
I've got a lyric here and I need a melody to go along with it It should be slow, sweet.....
Thanks


Wake up at the midnight
Lots of things to realize
Thru the window that I look
The Midnight sky is so high

Hey silver moon on the sky
Could you tell me that I'm right
For everytime I escape ?
But he just smiles and goes by

Hey northern star on the sky
Please tell me who'll be mine
Lead me to her, my first love
She's just silent all the time.

Hey summer wind on the sky
Please blow away my feelings
Sad, cold, fear....all the things
But he just laughs and flies by

All the feelings that I hide
Should I let them just are mine ?
All the answers that I've got
What i should keep till the end ?
WHEREVER YOU GO
WHATEVER YOU DO
I WILL BE RIGHT HERE WAITING FOR YOU
WHATEVER IT TAKES
OR HOW MY HEART BREAKS
I WILL BE RIGHT HERE WAITING FOR YOU
#2
it's much easier to start with a melody in the chorus. If it were my piece, I'd start there.
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#3
Ok, I've tried

Second stanza, it's so slow and sweet you fall asleep

Might not be what your after :P
Attachments:
melody.zip
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#4
Moved to Techniques. The main S+L forum is for critique only.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.
#5
Thank you so much for trying this . I think it's great.
the 1st and the last stanza could be the beginning and the end ?
WHEREVER YOU GO
WHATEVER YOU DO
I WILL BE RIGHT HERE WAITING FOR YOU
WHATEVER IT TAKES
OR HOW MY HEART BREAKS
I WILL BE RIGHT HERE WAITING FOR YOU