Hey Guys, if possible could you check out these lyrics that I wrote and give some constructive criticism? That would be awesome. If you have any ideas for the rest of the song that would be great! Thanks! I'm shooting for a Indie/rock song here.

Verse 1
We’re not the victims when were the ones at fault
Losing ourselves just to find who we are
Tired of running in place
The only problems are ones we create

Verse 2
Keeping distance from your mind
You’re never wrong and always right
Waking up to a new beginning
All while you re still repairing

Martin DSR
Taylor 214e
Fender Strat
Epiphone 335 Dot
Carlo Robelli Acoustic

1978 Fender Pro Reverb
Boss Blues Driver
Boss Super Overdrive
EHX Holy Grail
Boss DD-20 Giga Delay
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Reported for closing/moving.
i think the whole concept of the song its too repetitive. I also think its a bit a cliche. i dont want to sound harsh or anything, i just dont find this songwriting too fresh.