on our myspace there are 2 demos to 2 of our songs, i apologize for the average quality but we would love to have some feedback!
Recording quality obviously not great, but I think it's pretty good in terms of the parts you've written. The first track isn't quite as tight as it could be, just keep practicing it to get the feel of the timing maybe, it just sounds a bit stiff. The second track is better, obviously just needs development as a piece/song/whatever. Overall, a good basis for development, keep working, practicing, writing. Good job. Crit back if you can, it'd be hugely appreciated: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=12999027#post12999027