#1
Just something I came up with. Tell me what you think.

Come To The Darkness

Verse
The light is blinding you
It used to blind me too
Then I found my way
I found a place to stay

Chorus
Come to the darkness
Join me in the shade
Go into the blackness
It's okay to be afraid
Step into the lightless
Meet me at the fade
Quickly to the colorless
That's where I've stayed

Verse
The light hurts my eyes
All the people full of lies
You have to find a way out
Don't worry I know the route

Chorus
Come to the darkness
Join me in the shade
Go into the blackness
It's okay to be afraid
Step into the lightless
Meet me at the fade
Quickly to the colorless
That's where I've stayed

Bridge
Enter the void of black
And you'll never go back

Chorus
Come to the darkness
Join me in the shade
Go into the blackness
It's okay to be afraid
Step into the lightless
Meet me at the fade
Quickly to the colorless
That's where I've stayed

Solo

Chorus
Come to the darkness
Join me in the shade
Go into the blackness
It's okay to be afraid
Step into the lightless
Meet me at the fade
Quickly to the colorless
That's where I've stayed

Outro
Come to the darkness

In my IMO I think it is a good piece, but it probably could be better.
#3
Its pretty good, but I get the feeling that the darkness is suppose to be hell and the light is heaven, dont no if thats how it was suppose to sound or if thats the way I interpreted it but idk
#4
^ No I'm Christian, thanks for the comments though.

"The people are full of lies"

The song is about stepping away from the lies and crap people give you.
Last edited by Plan_B at Apr 21, 2008,