#1
please never say goodbye
tell me the truth
am I going to die
and when the time comes
we are all going to lie
Like it or not
your time has come
get ready to die
Final words
please never say goodbye
#2
so cliched.

even the title is bad.
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#4
mm... I think you need more words in your words:rhyme ratio

you could fix some of the cliches if you change the rhyming words to multi-syllable words
#5
Dude...you need to write more...and change the name of the song sounds to popular for what your trying to say...
#7
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what is cliches?

A cliché (from French, klɪ'ʃe) is a phrase, expression, or idea that has been overused to the point of losing its intended force or novelty, especially when at some time it was considered distinctively forceful or novel. The term is most likely to be used in a negative context.

Source: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cliche
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i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror