#1
(Intro)
Shriveled leaves play games around them,
Simply vagabonds!

Even trees now disregarding,
Outcasts from beyond!

(Verse)
Seen as aliens, felt as tortured friends
They wish to never slip away
Scowling at the world around them,
Their music is the only way…

(Pre-chorus)
They don’t care if you ignore them,
They don’t care if you come and go
As long as you have stood before them,
Their enemies have felt the blow…

(Chorus)
Expansions of the mind,
Don’t you get left behind,
Should they slow down,
Can you keep up?

(Verse)
The others see them now, secretly envious,
The others only pretend to play,
Deep as an ocean are these musicians,
Their music is the only way…

(Pre-chorus)
They don’t care if you ignore them,
They don’t care if you come and go
As long as you have stood before them,
Their enemies have felt the blow…

(Chorus)
Expansions of the mind,
Don’t you get left behind,
Should they slow down,
Can you keep up?


I do plan to add on another verse or two. This song is planned to be around 7 minutes long, so it will have plenty of instrumental sections. Btw, incase you couldn't figure it out, its about people that really love music and are good at what they do, but are ignored, and the people flock around "their enemies", who are the people who only play music not for the joy, but for the chicks, and such. Hope you enjoy.
Eschquipment:
Epiphone SG400
Peavy Vypr 30 watt
Dean Vendetta XM

and thats about it...
#3
uhm thnx? Not much critique but a simple "nice" is always good :P
Eschquipment:
Epiphone SG400
Peavy Vypr 30 watt
Dean Vendetta XM

and thats about it...
Last edited by Arca301 at Apr 21, 2008,
#4
hmn... I seemed to get alot more responses last time around...
Eschquipment:
Epiphone SG400
Peavy Vypr 30 watt
Dean Vendetta XM

and thats about it...
#5
It seemed the chorus seemed like it didn't flow as well as the rest, but it's pretty good other than that.