#1
Sometimes death is right around the corner
No one ever sees it coming
You can’t be prepared
No one ever sees it coming

ITS RIGHT AROUND THE CORNER!!!!!!!!!!!
NO ONE EVER SEES IT COMING
YOU CAN’T BE PREPARED
NO ON EVER SEES IT COMING

You may expect it
But know one will ever see it coming
It’s impossible to predict it
You never see it coming

YOU MAY EXPECT IT
BUT NO ONE WILL EVER SEE IT COMING
IT’S IMPOSSIBLE TO PREDICT IT
YOU NEVER SEE IT COMING

I’m afraid
I’m so scared to die (SLOW PART)
I wish I didn’t have to

I’M SO SCARED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I’m afraid
I’m so scared to die (SLOW PART)
I wish I didn’t have to

DON’T LET ME DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH PLEASE GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

There’s time I lay awake at night
My time could be soon
Or far away
I won’t know until it happens

It doesn’t really matter
I’m still so scared
I wish I didn’t have to
So many times I ask myself
Why I have to die

I’m afraid
I’m so scared to die (SLOW PART)
I wish I didn’t have to

I’M SO SCARED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I’m afraid
I’m so scared to die (SLOW PART)
I wish I didn’t have to

DON’T LET ME DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH PLEASE GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
#2
um im just gonna say its over all good except that you use way too many "ever sees it comings" in the beginning thats my opinion and youre certainly entitled to crit mine :]

and to name it idk name it something cool like "(Don't Let Me) Die"