#1
Yeah, I covered it. I honestly hate my voice, but it's pointless without the vocals. Forgive the microphone stupid acting stupid towards the end.

Listen to it either on my profile or www.purevolume.com/grahamjoyner

Edit: For some reason it cut off the mini solo at the end, oh well, thought it sounded pretty cool.
"This is The End, beautiful friend, The End"
#2
the vocals are sort of out of time. and if thats the intention then make it a bit less out of time. other than that its not bad other than like the mic mix up and stuff.
#3
Its barely noticable. Guitar is amazing, really great. Voice is great in the verses, the chorus is not so hot, but thats because that note is impossible. I cant hit it either. Try falsetto? Idk. You have a great voice though, and vocal tone is great too.

Mind critting any of my songs in my profile?