#1
Verse

If I were to choose a time and place
I’d pick right now right here
Because all my recent faults
Have seemed to disappear

And I don’t expect them back
They’re gone with forever
They’re gone with forever
They’re gone with forever

Chorus

So never see the light of night
And never see the dark of day
We’re somewhere in between
Where things aren’t so clear

Now we’re stuck in a daze
And there’s no way out
But that’s just fine with me
Because I’ll eventually luck out
And see the light of day

Verse

If I were to choose a place and time
I’d pick right here right now
A couple illusions pass by
And leave with no sound

And I don’t expect them back
They’re gone with forever
They’re gone with forever
They’re gone with forever
#2
I didn't like the line 'They’re gone with forever' because it doesn't make sense to me...i think you should change the with to something else such as now or just get rid of it completly. I really like 'If I were to choose a place and time I’d pick right here right now' they are my favourite lyrics out of this song. Overall a good piece.