#1
Female confidantes
Starbuck's parking lots
Is this where we die?
Well naturally
It might as well be
But who really cares?
Suburban boredom
A useless wisdom
Jerry Falwell and
Anita Bryant
Don't fail me now


*working title: I can't write anymore =(
Last edited by DorkusMalorkus at Apr 23, 2008,
#2
I read it presuming the title referred to people I don't know.

So I kinda of failed to really connect.
#4
I really enjoyed this.

"But who gives a ****?" is too immature or blunt and "Suburban boredom" might be clichéd but I'm not so sure it matters, since it works in the context.