#1
I look in you eyes
I stop the tears from coming
I color your world when it’s full of gray

Hun I wish I could be there
To stop the world when it troubles you
Hun I’m sorry I can hardly bare
Another minute with out you

I think of your smile
It stops my tears from coming
Makes my world into a sunny day

Hun I wish I could be there
To stop the world when it troubles you
Hun I’m sorry I can hardly bare
Another minute with out you

When we see each other
We can’t stop our tears from falling
We’re so shy we don’t know what to say

Hun I’m glad that I’m finally here
To stop the world just to kiss your cheek
Hun I’m sorry that it took so long
Now I have forever to be with you
#2
I look in you eyes
I stop the tears from coming
I color your world when it’s full of gray
I like the three opening lines, perhaps change 'full of gray' to 'filled with grey'

Hun I wish I could be there
To stop the world when it troubles you
Hun I’m sorry I can hardly bare
Another minute with out you
Using 'hun' makes it feel more person, however I don't think you should repeat 'hun' on the 3rd line, it's a bit over repeatative and stops it from flowing. Other than that it's good though

I think of your smile
It stops my tears from coming
Makes my world into a sunny day
I like this part

Hun I wish I could be there
To stop the world when it troubles you
Hun I’m sorry I can hardly bare
Another minute with out you
Same as i stated above

When we see each other
We can’t stop our tears from falling
We’re so shy we don’t know what to say
Very good, like this part

Hun I’m glad that I’m finally here
To stop the world just to kiss your cheek
Hun I’m sorry that it took so long
Now I have forever to be with you
Same as above

I really like this, some good imagery 8/10!

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#4
is it about me? I hope so. whoever its about its really beautiful and there very lucky.