#1
Hey yall I posted this on here a little while ago, but I re-wrote it and changed it around let me no what you think

Must stay awake
They can't get me then
Oh no here they come

I feel them drawing near
The nightmares are almost here
My greatest fear

The nightmares are here!
Feeding on my fear
Why can't they just stay clear

Fear controls me
This is easy to see
Why can't they just leave me be?

Monstrositys in my sight
Keeping me up at night
I can already see the morning light

Fear controls me
This is easy to see
Why can't they just leave me be?

I'm losing my mind
I can't put the fear behind
What happened to my peace of mind?

The doctors say
Sanity is slipping away
More and more, day by day

well guys thats what I got let me know what you think, thanks
#2
I like it. Beat was kinda odd but the lyrics are solid.
If u put the right guitar behind it it will be a very good song.