#1
Hello, this is my first full song recorded, any advice would be awesome. I dont know the structures of songs, like chorus's or w/e so it might be all over the place.

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#2
well the recording is really bad...but trying to put that aside...most of the riffs that i hear you play could use alot more creativity and variety like use some spicing up and no offense but make things more interesting...which takes time...and on the guitar harmonies you do...it could use some work you go off a few notes which make the harmony sound like ****...and same with the solo...you hit some right notes...but the ugly ones make the song crap...just need to study up bro
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#3
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