#1
this is just a rough sketch, if you will, of what i was looking for. i know the chorus as it is right now doesnt add any thing, well i think it might take away a little. but any tips or advice or ideas is appreciated. crit4crit.

Before I said I love you
I said I’d never lie
but if you lie once
you’re a liar the rest of your life
so if I lied when I said I wouldn’t
does that mean I love you
the answer to this question
is quite simple
the answer to this question
is no

if it was real love
I wouldn’t be letting you go
but I wouldn’t think twice
I’m not moving to slow

so now I’m left to tell you
the truth behind my lies
these secrets I have kept
this entire time
did you think I was telling the truth
that I really did love you
the answer to this question
is quite simple
the answer to this question
is no

if it was real love
I wouldn’t be letting you go
but I wouldn’t think twice
I’m not moving to slow

every time I see your face
I get lost in your eyes
wondering if I made a mistake
if I ruined the rest of my life
will you come back to me
cause baby I love you
the answer to this question
is quite simple
the answer to this question
is no

if it was real love
you wouldn’t be letting me go
but I wouldn’t think twice
of ever forgetting you
but I wouldn’t think twice
of ever forgetting you