#1
Used to shred, the rippin' game got old, so i decided to test a new style

Hey guys, i was just hoping for some feedback on my newest song and maybe some crit on another song that i updated !
The new one is number 1 on the player, updated and edited is number 2.

Be sure to listen to "Im The Kingpin Street"

http://www.purevolume.com/VIsFinest
#3
sounds a little generic to me

write more from the heart
seems like your writing what people want to hear

if its more heartfelt, people will dig it more.

and yes i actually do know something about rap.


you got potential though
Call me Trey.