Used to shred, the rippin' game got old, so i decided to test a new style

Hey guys, i was just hoping for some feedback on my newest song and maybe some crit on another song that i updated !
The new one is number 1 on the player, updated and edited is number 2.

Be sure to listen to "Im The Kingpin Street"

kingpin of the canadian rap scene huh??? i don't really care for rap..but i have listened to it...your beats are ok...kinda generic and your lyrics and flow are pretty forced...you need to try and make a smoother transition from line to line...why does everyone have to be thug in rap??? im pretty confident you havn't "fired heat"...write lyrics that mean something to you...not what everyone else does...
'To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important, sacred or valuable. To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility.'
-Kurt Cobain