now the storys bent and broken
now my heart has words unspoken
then it all came crashing down
like a steak into the ground

While he loves her from a distance
on the man with least resistance
Since the time has come and pass
I will finally dream at last
I enjoyed it, although I'm not sure about "on the man with least resistance"
It would make I good song, I could picture how it would sound when I read it.

No need to crit back, but it would be nice.
It's called "Walking, Good Times, and the Street".

Good job, by the way.
ok, yeah. my name is silly because I signed up when I was 13.