#1
Cheers UG,

I rarely write, and this piece was on a whim. It came out kinda grim (see what I'm doing? ), but I'd still like your opin(ion). ignore me, here is this piece.

No lie, I bet I can

…Make you a General
Wear your lovers’ broken hearts
Upon your unblemished flesh
Organs of the black and bruised
Bleeding from wounds
Old and fresh
Medals from a massacre of martyrs
Lead blindly on
By the promise of rain
To soak these barren fields; scarlet in hue
Countless attempts
All made in vain
So lead your victory march
Upon your stallion, on the backs of the damned
Let them look at you, perched on high
God at your command
Hemorrhage from your eyes
And will them bleed out
Stain your cloth, crimson
From the lies on your lips to the taint in your mouth
I’d plead you’d save your own soul
By ripping it out….

No lie, I bet I can.

No problem, I really don't like it either. It's not really me.

DON'T PANIC! DON'T PANIC!
THEY DON'T LIKE IT UP 'EM!
#2
Awesome job!
I can imagine it with some...er.what do you call it..?
Viking metal! with some viking metal riffs in the backround. Like a true march with destruction in it's wake.
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Schecter S1 Diamond series.
ESP NV.
Randall G3 200W
Dunlop cry-baby wah (finally)
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#3
Quote by Blooddawning
Awesome job!
I can imagine it with some...er.what do you call it..?
Viking metal! with some viking metal riffs in the backround. Like a true march with destruction in it's wake.

Thanks man, that'd be interesting. I dunno I just couldn't sleep so I wrote myself to bed, I might expand on it a little. I like that idea tho', cheers!

DON'T PANIC! DON'T PANIC!
THEY DON'T LIKE IT UP 'EM!