#1
I need a bit of advice, please feel free to tell me what you think

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#3
Very nice song! I like the vocals, the rithm guitar has a nice sound too, keep those songs coming!
#5
Good stuff man, only negative comment is that the lead guitarwork is out of time. The rhythm guitar and vocals are spot on. Your vocals seem to improve on the higher notes in the chorus. The chorus is a good on too, and overall a good tune, good job.

Crit me back if you can https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=796639
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#6
Really cool song. I think it needs some backup vocals and something more to it. Backup vocals in the chorus would be nice. Possibly some sort of piano or lead guitar riff in the background would sound nice, even during the verses or choruses. Good song tho, nicely put together, just needs a lil something to bring it up a notch.

C4C Please: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=845401
#7
Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it. As with the lead out of time, I did actually mean it to be, just beacuse I thought it sounds a little bit more intresting but i see your point.
anyone else?
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#8
Awesome tune! Turn up the vocals up a bit, aswell as the lead guitar maybe, it's difficult to hear. Anyways, very good chord progression, and very groovy bassline.

I agree with everyone that the lead was out of time, but if you meant it that way, then good

Cool song, cheers for the crit!
#10
Hey man, thanks for the crit on my reverse solo. I'm diggin' the overall vibe of the song, pretty cool. Nice chord progression, leads, melody, etc.. Vocals could use a bit of work at times, but sounds pretty good too. I'd work on the mixing, the vocals weren't quite audible over the rhythm guitar. Overall a nice song though.



EDIT: C4C4C? (If that works..)

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=845483

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