#1
crit4crit of course


Can I get your name?
Maybe even your address?
You can write it on the skin peeling off your chest.

Is that betrayal I smell?
Or is it cheap hooker perfume?
Back to back,
Side by side,
Whatever way you want me too.

Don’t you see the liquid of deceit,
Falling from the sky,
A musky stink latches on to you,
To me it passes by,
Let’s paddle out to sea,
On the city streets,
I heard you’d take me on a ride,
For three easy payments of nine ninety-five.

Personality,
Warped into transparency,
I hope you don’t mind me asking,
Do you think you look good on me?

Didn’t you think I’d see,
I’m barking up the wrong tree,
You’re just another girl I bought,
At the top of oxford street.

Didn’t you think I’d see,
I’m barking up the wrong tree,
You’re just another girl I bought,
At the top of oxford street.

You’re just another girl I bought,
At the top of oxford street.
I'm here to help

Quote by Jimbleton
ok, as usual pit is being very unhelpful except andychalmers, so im gonna go post this someplace else


And a master of storytelling...

Quote by Jackolas
andychalmers102, that story is awesome.
#3
Quote by Burnt Ice
I take it you live in Oshawa..

Actually I live in Sydney
I'm here to help

Quote by Jimbleton
ok, as usual pit is being very unhelpful except andychalmers, so im gonna go post this someplace else


And a master of storytelling...

Quote by Jackolas
andychalmers102, that story is awesome.