#1
I'd like to get some feedback on the track In the Darkness of the Depths from my profile.

The quality of the recording is so-so (I now see the folly in trying to record a song on a 50 watt tube amp in an enviroment where you have to keep it down ), and due to my "EQ-ing" in Audacity the intro part sounds a tad out of tune at a couple of spots. Sorry about that!
#2
I like it. But I think your guitar was a little out of tune. It would be cool with some drums and stuff. Could you crit mine army of the dead.
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#3
Quote by Descendent-182
I like it. But I think your guitar was a little out of tune. It would be cool with some drums and stuff. Could you crit mine army of the dead.

Yeah, the guitar is not correctly intoniated at that, so there's also that.

And done. Although I don't know squat about that kind of music, which kinda makes my input a bit reduntant.