#1
Just a concept I will develop over the course of the next few days, this is a rough draft.
I tried to keep it very spacey to float the solo on top. Mostly arpeggios. Hope you enjoy it and am always happy to comment on yours to in turn. Enjoy. Its in my profile
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#2
Cool man, i feel a very distinct mood from it but i can't figure out what it'd be. Maybe trypanning the rhythm away from the lead track and/or changing the tone of one of the guitars, just because it's sometimes difficult to discern one from the other. A bass part would sound out of place either. I like the end part. crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=846784
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#3
I like it alot, its very mellow. its really good except about 1/2 way through it seems to get a little confusing, but then the ending gets really good. a good bass line would do good if you can.
crit me https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=846791
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Me playing
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