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Hey dudes.. this is a song i've written to play with my band, just wanted some opinions. \m/ o o \m/

For the Last Time
Verse 1
Drowning, in a sea of lies
No rescue,
Can’t hear my cries
I choke with fear
I scream with pain
After this I won’t be the same

Bridge
No shelter here from the falling rain

Can't see my friends, can’t feel the pain

No rescue, from this sea of lies
There is no one to hear my cries

Chorus
Nothing left but deaths embrace
Screaming fear, this grinding race
Nothing left but deaths embrace,
No way now to change my fate

Verse 2
Sailing, on a lake of blood
All I wanted,
All I could
This wind from hell
It burns my soul
Blackest heart,
Black as coal

Chorus
Nothing left but deaths embrace
Screaming fear, the grinding race
Nothing left but deaths embrace
No way now to change my fate

Bridge
No shelter here from the falling rain

Can't see my friends, can’t feel the pain

No rescue, from this sea of lies
There is no one to hear my cries

Verse 3
Nothing left but deaths embrace
Can't feel my hands
Can't feel my face
As life drains from me
I hear the darkness calling,
Calling, calling