#1
Its more of an intro for a sad acoustic number and Its based on how I've been feeling lately. Criticize gently : )?

When rain clouds leave rolling away.
Leaving the pavement... Wet dull and gray.
When the wind is frigid and there's no where to stay.
There's nothing left but to look away.

So keep it in mind when colros come back one day.
The pavement has already scared from the pain.
And when frowns are pierced with sun rays.
It still leaves holes for the rain to drip through.


I just cant think of a title.
And i need some opinions. I rarely write anything so I'm wondering if this is something worth writing a song around.