#1
Yeah, soo we made a recording, some of you might have seen the video...

well here we go...

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#2
im listening to it as a crit. I really like the introduction, its my style of music but its also well done. the bass is a little to loud, it seems like you eq'd it on monitors with very weak bass. the singers voice is great. even being a fan of minimalism, i think the guitar sounds a bit stale after a while, you should maybe change it when the music picks up. you sound just like ben folds

you should check out my topic


https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=846943
#3
I liked it, I'd say the biggest problem was that the vocals were a little bit off pitch in some parts. Lead and backing. And like the guy above me said, the bass it a little bit too loud, it sorta overpowers the song. Other than that, great job!
#4
30 seconds in and the actual song is only just starting, I'd recommend you cut the beginning, good strong vocals and a nice guitar tone. I really like this just cut the beginning like I said.

crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=847212
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#5
Quote by damn-right!
30 seconds in and the actual song is only just starting, I'd recommend you cut the beginning, good strong vocals and a nice guitar tone. I really like this just cut the beginning like I said.

crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=847212



this guy doesn't like intros hahah.....

i love the beginning, i think it adds a lot, it would be a great opening track.
#6
Quote by blackmajik2021
this guy doesn't like intros hahah.....

i love the beginning, i think it adds a lot, it would be a great opening track.


Ahem, woman.

and I have no problem with intros, just when theres nothing but the same thing over and over or if theres nothing but one noise for 30 seconds then it gets to the point where I'm going ok start now...
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#7
you should listen to the song 'all my friends' by lcd soundsystem. I believe it got song of the year from some of the big music publications / websites. i wasnt trying to offend/ make fun of you. i hate how context gets screwed up in the internet.

http://hypem.com/track/510702
Last edited by blackmajik2021 at Apr 27, 2008,