i like it. But you can tell your inspirations. Which is also a good thing. keep making them.
sounds good man, really tight. The vocals are pretty good, could be a bit better but compared to most extreme metal vocals I hear from solo projects you vox pwn.

The acoustic part is a total 'Peth section, but the lead-ish thing voer it is weak.

I'd give it like a 7.5 or 8 out of 10 when it comes to one man bands on myspace. KEEP IT UP AND KEEPZ IT GOINZ METULL!

oh yeah, the bass could be deeper and have a little more top end, the guitar tones pretty cool though

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THANKS dude thats exactly what i want from you guys, that kind of crit. thanks dude. i will try to work on it more just to polish it more, and ill try to work more on those spots for the next song, which is already in progress... thanks once again dude.