intro is good. nice and laid back. tone is nice. has a rather lugubrious feel at the start, i like it. i also like when it gets heavier. playing was good and tight, no pun intended >_>

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You are EXTREMELY WRONG! I have played it. I own an 18W and it would be an awful stereo amp, it's way too bright, breaks up too easily and so on. Secondly, why would a guitar store sell an hifi amp.
I like the feel of this song. Some vocals with delay and/or reverb would sound pretty cool in my opinion. I really like the tone of your guitar and the reverse delay. I think the kick drum might be a little loud compared to the rest of the drum kit, so maybe backing off the kick or bringing up the snare, hats and cymbals might polish the overall sound more. Good work though, keep it up!

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good song i like the flow of it. when the bass and drums come in its a little awkward but i like it. good lyrics would do this very good. i like it rock on

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Epiphone Les Paul Standard
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I liked the "orrigional guitar" track, but some parts did seem a little empty to me without vocals or a lead guitar over the top. Also, this is just my preferance, but your tone seemed like it had a little too much bass for my liking. But again, that is just my opinion.

I liked your pentatonic licks toward the end. They deffenatly gave the track a blues-metal vibe. Overall, it was a pretty cool track.

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I really like the intro! like other said, nice and lay-back. I'm not very fond of the part of the distortion section without druks or whatever, sounds like it would fit in better if it was just clean right there. I have the feeling the distortion overpowers too much. solo guitar kicks in great man, I love it! Amazing.

Here is my new song, I could use some feedback!