#1
... Please comment and criticize, say what you like ...


Your neck is a beauty,
your body is too.
I’m only really living
when I’m playing with you

Everywhere on your body
that’s where my hand goes,
and the best part is;
You never wear clothes!

You’ll let anybody have the key to your front door,
But there are those of us who just want so much more.
So I’m tryin’ and I’m tryin’ ‘cause I hope that by tryin’
I someday will find the key to your mind

Some day through you I hope to claim
like so many others, wealth and fame
I know that you’ll follow me, always,
and through all of my changes you remain the same.


... The song is not about a girl, it's about my guitar ...
#2
Nice.
ESP Eclipse-II VTB (With 18v Mod)
Randall RG75
Tapco Mix60
New Zealand
#4
Well, maybe you love it too much in a creepy way... However it is a good one, nice job.
Guilty as charge
Gear:
Ibanez RGT42BP (pimped)

Amp:
Ibanez Toneblaster 250

Other:
Tremolo from Boss
Footswitch to Toneblaster 250.
Korg AX3000G
#5
I just posted a song yesterday with this same title, LOL.

Yours is a different approach, though. I like it.
and this moment keeps on movin'
we were never meant to hold on.
#6
Quote by guilty
Well, maybe you love it too much in a creepy way... However it is a good one, nice job.


hehe you may be right . Thanks
#7
dude check out my guitar song it will be up tommorrow called new found love.
i like this song it is very original, besides the fact i have one written but its cool. flows nice and is super sexy, especially cause its about a guitar. love it keep up the good work