#1
self destruction by:kevin dupuis

Forged from hatred
Hate instilled at a young age
Forced upon by death filled dreams
Gnawing at my thoughts
Unsure of my self worth
Stairing in the mirror
Enraged at the reflection
Eyes black, unresponsive
Hopelessly lost
Uncontrollable urges of self destruction
Letting it all loose

I NEED TO FIT IN A VERSE HERE, IM WORKING ON IT

Now I lay on the floor
Twitching muscles searching for blood
Insane filth, full of gore
Now i lay, no more
#2
Check the rules on titles for your threads, and the limits of posting your pieces, 1 per day and this is your second so the thread will be closed, you'll get a better response by keeping only one piece up per 6 days I think it is, check the rules.

*reported*
Last edited by TobyFellrunners at Apr 28, 2008,