So I posted a song on here a couple weeks back and recieved generally Positive feedback, so I decided to post another one Ive been working on for awhile.

Its titled Conatus, any feedback is much appreciated!
Oh yea, C4C of course.


Thanks everyone!
Are you Pactworthy?
Tones good, everything seems to go together well. I like the transition at 1:39, its a cool riff. Nothing that i can really think of that needs improvment.

I like our grave too, it starts out light and goes into heavy.
I really liked some parts of this song. Some of it sounded a lot like Iron Maiden to me (that's always good). There were a few parts here and there that I wasn't crazy about (such as the chorus), but that is probably because I am not much of a metal head. Overall, I really enjoyed both of your songs.

Any chance you could take a look at mine?

Really cool tone, the beginning riff is very cool.
Not crazy about the vocals, but they were good!
Very Iron Maiden-ish like mccabe24 said.
Very good transition at 1:38~ Very cool riff afterwards.
Didn't like the tone used for the "solo", but that may just be me.
The "solo" itself was cool, easy and entertaining

Anyways, very good song, good job!

Mind checking mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=845240
Good work dude. It's not my kind of music, but I must say it's put together really well and the mix is pretty tight. Not much else I can say about it besides good job, keep it up!

P.S. Thanks for the crit on my thread!
Again, good stuff, glad the guitars were louder...but im still not sure about that first yeahhhhhhhhh....oh well, the other stuff is good, keep it up!