#1
My latest piece. Crit for crit.

Workin every every day for the minimum wage, my boss thinks that he owns this stage
Well doesn't he have to train everyone, no he doesn't think that it's any fun

Tommorow morning and it'll be the same, when you can't get out of your bed again. There's no lager left in the house and you realise the fridge light's gone out.

Chorus:

But your hours up and your friends arrived, you're sposed to be out on the town tonight. The shop is shut and your mates gone home, your working the late nights all alone.

Next morning and your heads a mess and you hadn't even bothered to get undressed. But the clocks gone off and you are late, last nights fun was a big mistake.

Another day that you hate, working the nights for almost zero paym and your gonna be late to get in, but this jobs one that you can never win.

This job was a wrong one from the start
Blaming everybody else, but you had your part

Earning barely the minimum wage, never finding yourself centre stage.
But the time is up and the funs run out, want a drink but it's not allowed

Chorus:

But your hours up and your friends arrived, you're sposed to be out on the town tonight. The shop is shut and your mates gone home, your working the late nights all alone.
BECOME A FAN!

DISCO IS DEAD!

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#2
not bad do u hav music to go wit th lyrics?
kinda reminds me of swing life away lol jus the minimum wage part
#3
Thanks man, I've been toying around with music for it but I've not really found anything to do it justice yet..

Dan
BECOME A FAN!

DISCO IS DEAD!

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(Repeat until audience is driven mad)


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Wait a minute. Your telling me your gf is related to 'The' Robert Plant?!