#1
Now this is actually only my second lyrics i completed and it's wuite long in my opinion ... the song is about geting rid off the evil inside somebody, then he suceeds , but at the end he realizes the evil was part of him and tries to get it back
i would really like you to rate it
the song is also complete if you want to lsiten to it to get a better impression you can find a midi file here:

Withering Illusions (Midi)

The Lyrics are :


Don't dare to interrupt my way
I care no sacrifice
No reasons left for you to stay
consider my advice

Stand – this final revelation
to extend – a meaningless relation
Leave your intentions behind


Your ambitions
that I didn't want to see
decay like bones to dust
they're only withering illusions to me

(Solo 1)

Don't want to hear your splitted tongue
your slyness turns me ill
for all your words are wicked wrong
each time I feel the chill

I don't fulfill your expectations
I'm in full control of my mind
Don't you get sick of revelations
just leave your plans behind

Condemned – the plans you were contriving
are banned – now seek a place for hiding
Feel my merciless revenge


Your ambitions
that I didn't want to see
decay like bones to dust
they're only withering illusions to me
withering illusions to me

(Solo 2)

Has he gone?
Did he break his vow?
The execrable one
Leave me now!

(Solo 3+4)

I cannot find the reason why
I messed up to divine
that your power was increasing 'though
I struggled all the time

I continuous intended to
get rid of your presence
although I knew that if it ended
I would fall to your demands

Restore - the times when I had shivered
No more - I seek a mind delivered
Come lead me back to my life

Your ambitions
that I didn't want to see
soared me above the dust
why are they withering illusions to me
withering illusions to me
soared me above the dust
why are they withering illusions to me
withering illusions to me



Thanks in advance
Darukan
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#2
Please give the rules the once over, then you can repost this.

Thanks
THW
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.