#1
This is a song i wrote a month ago... It´s not that brutal, but it still has power.

C4C
Attachments:
Machines.zip
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.

Quote by Lord-O-Donuts
Banned for being the coolest April 08'er on UG.


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#3
The mad israeli stole my words. It is kind of melodic and doesn't change much. If it was a recorded song that I had on my ipod, i guess i could get used to it.

Thanks for your crit btw
#4
Just like themadisraeli said. It's a bit toooo melodic. Try and find an alternative scale to use, or play around with modes.

The intro was very Killswitch Engage, I thought! Which is cool!
The verse was pretty cool, I can imagine some cool screaming there!

The bridge was alright, it went well. But on it's own it's nothing special.
The preverse sounded a little bit like something Avenged Sevenfold might play, which is really cool!

The chorus was a let down, I was expecting something really big and maybe a bit epic. Bit it was just like a re-intro.

The 'drug part' was pretty cool, Although the time signature sounded weird after a while.
The bit with the harmonys after that again was very A7x. Then the clean guitars sound like KSE. While the A7xness continues with the harmonys, which was a cool comnination!

Overall, 8/10!

Crit either of mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=847127

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=847949
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